Sonnet 35

  • In the midst of autumn, post-fog pre-dew,
  • A trumpeting clarity, a genuine you.
  • Singing songs in every sway you stroll,
  • A shining hope for every day's toll.
  • And while that payment is made at every end,
  • Your mirth supersedes the worth of ten.
  • A queen by all means, yet still coy, at bay,
  • Awaiting that time to shine, glisten, stay.
  • But steady is not the path you seek,
  • Though primp and composed, your rainbows leak.
  • Fluffs of feist dart from your hair and eyes,
  • A brilliant composition, a harmonic baptize.
  • So in this moment, this silence, this pause.
  • Let me witness, aggrandize, awe.

Notes

Wrote this in a rather irrational morning (got home extremely late, woke up abnormally early), rolled over and hung down my bed with iPhone in hand, and thumb-tapped this into the built-in Notes app with little-to-no pause.

Extremely happy with the rhythm of the piece. This was meant to frame a specific moment with someone I was hanging out with, wherein I was mostly speechless and inable to explain what I was feeling (see the heroic couplet). Had to write this the following morning to help me make sense of things. And it worked.

— Huy on